Sasha, THANK YOU for contributing such a stellar draft! I've gone through and made some edits, some more British spelling-isms + putting some of the goals in active tense. I also made the scope (in terms of who it applies to) a bit more explicit. Warm regards, Amanda On 08/04/2019 10:36, John Springer wrote:
I agree, excellent work!
I have suggest some minor edits of the Response guide.
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On Sat, Apr 6, 2019 at 5:10 AM David Huberman <david.huberman@icann.org <mailto:david.huberman@icann.org>> wrote:
Sasha,
The draft CoC is quite excellent. Nice work! I have completed a copyediting pass in "suggesting" mode:
- normalized words to British English spellings (3 instances of behavior were changed to behaviour) - removed contractions - fixed a few typos - enforced consistent paragraph spacing - enforced the Oxford comma
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On 4/5/19, 7:32 AM, "diversity on behalf of Sasha Romijn" <diversity-bounces@ripe.net <mailto:diversity-bounces@ripe.net> on behalf of sasha@mxsasha.eu <mailto:sasha@mxsasha.eu>> wrote:
Hello all,
Closely based on the work I did for Write the Docs, with some adjustments to fit the RIPE community, I put together a draft for a CoC and for a response guide.
I went with Google docs for now, as it’s quite accessible. You can leave comments and suggest changes, and we can discuss broader topics on the mailing list. There are a few parts about structure still to be filled in, but let’s start here. We haven’t really spoken about any of the details, other than a general “this can be a starting point”, so I don’t know what kind of discussions other people would like to bring up.
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