Sasha,

THANK YOU for contributing such a stellar draft! I've gone through and made some edits, some more British spelling-isms + putting some of the goals in active tense. I also made the scope (in terms of who it applies to) a bit more explicit.

Warm regards,

Amanda



On 08/04/2019 10:36, John Springer wrote:
I agree, excellent work! 

I have suggest some minor edits of the Response guide.

John Springer
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On Sat, Apr 6, 2019 at 5:10 AM David Huberman <david.huberman@icann.org> wrote:
Sasha,

The draft CoC is quite excellent. Nice work!  I have completed a copyediting pass in "suggesting" mode: 

- normalized words to British English spellings (3 instances of behavior were changed to behaviour)
- removed contractions
- fixed a few typos
- enforced consistent paragraph spacing
- enforced the Oxford comma

/david
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On 4/5/19, 7:32 AM, "diversity on behalf of Sasha Romijn" <diversity-bounces@ripe.net on behalf of sasha@mxsasha.eu> wrote:

    Hello all,

    Closely based on the work I did for Write the Docs, with some adjustments to fit the RIPE community, I put together a draft for a CoC and for a response guide.

    CoC:
    https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1IAJj9UjW2zroz5v6XQYgYEYotfZlV4Trk2vRdaoPaP4_edit&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=iTOW7nSt3tBCc5xNiHfQNhFilU9Ki9_nVAHGfa3QG5w&m=ag_h5GXVGbSsDgGW59YleMXVaOJnV4ga6CJcCIfZ38A&s=sy8t_T8v902B5ESqiOxzVnu6ezEWJaYUIsfScYJuvyY&e=

    Response guide:
    https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1gaLo4axYDRTpQnhUJyG92EHBmEIkxSDN8Urmy-2Dzn9nQ_edit&d=DwIGaQ&c=FmY1u3PJp6wrcrwll3mSVzgfkbPSS6sJms7xcl4I5cM&r=iTOW7nSt3tBCc5xNiHfQNhFilU9Ki9_nVAHGfa3QG5w&m=ag_h5GXVGbSsDgGW59YleMXVaOJnV4ga6CJcCIfZ38A&s=tLYhKXwOC4CmhGYH2JhF4h-Qy6XZgbV4ujIJt5XPyus&e=

    I went with Google docs for now, as it’s quite accessible. You can leave comments and suggest changes, and we can discuss broader topics on the mailing list. There are a few parts about structure still to be filled in, but let’s start here.
    We haven’t really spoken about any of the details, other than a general “this can be a starting point”, so I don’t know what kind of discussions other people would like to bring up.

    Sasha
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