5 Feb
2013
5 Feb
'13
4:46 p.m.
On 5 Feb 2013, at 15:16, Nick Hilliard wrote:
fwiw, i found this quite ambiguous too. It took several careful scans over the doc to figure out the intention. Some wordsmithing here would be quite beneficial.
Version 1 attracted criticism for (among other things!) mixing policy and motivation. I took the message that the policy itself should be as bare as possible, and that the motivation belonged in the discussion on this list. I brought this message to the process of drafting version 2, and pushed the "less is more" notion to the other co-authors. If I've taken this idea further than necessary, I'm sorry. /Niall