5 Nov
2009
5 Nov
'09
10:38 a.m.
Shane On 4 Nov 2009, at 03:09, Shane Kerr wrote: Looks good.
The working group will co-operate within the networking industry and without, to share resources and combine efforts.
My only nitpick would be the use of within and without - without is not really in common useage. Perhaps: The working group will co-operate with both the networking industry and the wider internet (or perhaps user?) community, to share resources and combine efforts. HTH f