Leo,

Thanks for this.

For my money I think we can share a draft of document 1 next week, and give a generous amount of time (including a reminder in early Jan) for feedback. I think that would be great. However others had more comments on that document than I did, so I'll defer to them.

Either way, I don't think anyone will get very angry at us whatever communication we send and we haven't committed to respond to or even include every comment, so the risk in general is low,

Thanks,

Brian

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Dear CoC TF,

It was lovely to see and speak with you all earlier today.

We agreed that we would all review, comment, and edit Document 1 in
the working draft by the end of Friday next week, and then discuss on
the list if we were in a position to publish it as a draft.

During our discussion, Brian noted that there was a difference in
style between the Expected and Unacceptable Behaviours sections. The
first made good use of bullets and the second had longer paragraphs
that were harder to parse. I have now broken those paragraphs into
bullets and listed the bullets alphabetically, which I hope makes it
clear that these are not in order of importance. This is visually a
large change, so I wanted to call it out.

I'd also like to call your attention to some open comments on parts of
the Rationale section. Do we want to make changes to the text, or
perhaps refer to external resources?

We also agreed to work on a draft communication. I have started work
on a draft, which attempts to remind people when we last communicated
and what we are doing. It then goes on to say what we have worked on
and there are two options for where we are now. Either, the draft has
been published and comments are welcome, or stating that the draft
will be published in January.

Working draft:
https://eur02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1zkYiQPkX6tq09tdpQdL_URbvfnILgwrqRn2zq2eBRYc&amp;data=04%7C01%7C%7C8cc65880756340b4a13a08d89890fa83%7Ccd9e8269dfb648e082538b7baf8d3391%7C0%7C1%7C637427096193596409%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&amp;sdata=N%2FEaiQ8J1GDpRrErSUuWwO04uuzL%2BJO%2B6F1g7ij%2FlxI%3D&amp;reserved=0

Draft communication:
https://eur02.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdocs.google.com%2Fdocument%2Fd%2F1uatZQ_qSLrxpS9v-fnq5sIYp5Pne2aYzwFowhl1XVBw%2F&amp;data=04%7C01%7C%7C8cc65880756340b4a13a08d89890fa83%7Ccd9e8269dfb648e082538b7baf8d3391%7C0%7C1%7C637427096193596409%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&amp;sdata=A5RKIh%2BNv6STAvHM0Vo5Mi9dOrSK6sKRJO1cOYTtuQI%3D&amp;reserved=0

Kind regards,

Leo

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