On 2/21/13 08:21 , Donal Cunningham wrote:
"Re-allocated blocks will be signed to establish the current allocation holder if the receiving party chooses."
Replace "will" with "may"? You could also add "so" before the word "chooses".
May I also suggest, s/signed/certified, and add to the end ", and any previous related certificates will be revoked." Revocation of previous related certificates is required if their are any, and not optional, new certificates for the new holder are optional. Put it all together and you get; "Re-allocated blocks may be certified to establish the current allocation holder if the receiving party so chooses, and any previous related certificates will be revoked." -- ================================================ David Farmer Email: farmer@umn.edu Office of Information Technology University of Minnesota 2218 University Ave SE Phone: 1-612-626-0815 Minneapolis, MN 55414-3029 Cell: 1-612-812-9952 ================================================