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I liked the simplified version of this document. Just a small feedback: section titled "Definitions" can be shortened further by eliminating well known jargon.
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From: address-policy-wg <address-policy-wg-bounces@ripe.net> on behalf of Marco Schmidt <mschmidt@ripe.net>
Sent: Wednesday, January 8, 2020 2:20:53 PM
To: address-policy-wg@ripe.net <address-policy-wg@ripe.net>
Subject: [address-policy-wg] 2019-06 Review Phase Extended (Multiple Editorial Changes in IPv6 Policy)
 
Dear colleagues,

Policy proposal 2019-06, "Multiple Editorial Changes in IPv6 Policy" is
now in the extended Review Phase.

This proposal aims to remove obsoleted text and simplify the IPv6 policy.

You can find the full proposal and the RIPE NCC impact analysis at:
https://www.ripe.net/participate/policies/proposals/2019-06

And the draft documents at:
https://www.ripe.net/participate/policies/proposals/2019-06/draft

As per the RIPE Policy Development Process (PDP), the purpose of this
four week extended Review Phase is to continue discussing the proposal,
taking the impact analysis into consideration, and to review the full
draft RIPE Policy Document.

At the end of the Review Phase, the Working Group (WG) Chairs will
determine whether the WG has reached rough consensus. It is therefore
important to provide your opinion, even if it is simply a restatement of
your input from the previous phase.

We encourage you to read the proposal, impact analysis and draft
document and send any comments to <address-policy-wg@ripe.net> before 6
February 2020.

Kind regards,

Marco Schmidt
Registration Services and Policy Development Assistant Manager
RIPE NCC




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