There are a number of occurrences of "an LIR" (and also "An LIR") throughout the document that should be changed to "a LIR".
Presumably only s/Organisation/LIR/ was done.

Other than this grammar nit, I am happy the text matches the goal and I support it.

Ian

-----Original Message-----
From: address-policy-wg <address-policy-wg-bounces@ripe.net> On Behalf Of Marco Schmidt
Sent: 03 May 2018 16:08
To: address-policy-wg@ripe.net
Subject: [address-policy-wg] 2018-01 Review Phase (Organisation-LIR Clarification in IPv6 Policy)

Dear colleagues,

Policy proposal 2018-01, "Organisation-LIR Clarification in IPv6 Policy" is now in the Review Phase.

This proposal aims to clarify the wording used in ripe-699 regarding terms such as "organisation" and "LIR".

The proposal has been updated following the last round of discussion and is now at version v2.0. Some of the differences from version v1.0 include:
- Clarifies when the subsequent allocation policy applies
- Fixing some typos

The RIPE NCC has prepared an impact analysis on this latest proposal version to support the community’s discussion. You can find the full proposal and impact analysis at:
https://www.ripe.net/participate/policies/proposals/2018-01

And the draft documents at:
https://www.ripe.net/participate/policies/proposals/2018-01/draft

As per the RIPE Policy Development Process (PDP), the purpose of this four week Review Phase is to continue discussing the proposal, taking the impact analysis into consideration, and to review the full draft RIPE Policy Document.

At the end of the Review Phase, the WG Chairs will determine whether the WG has reached rough consensus. It is therefore important to provide your opinion, even if it is simply a restatement of your input from the previous phase.

We encourage you to read the proposal, impact analysis and draft document and send any comments to <address-policy-wg@ripe.net> before 1 June 2018.

Kind regards,

Marco Schmidt
Policy Officer
RIPE NCC

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