Dear Tore, all, Thank you for the notification. The draft policy text has been corrected. The execution of the PDP is always improving. If the RIPE community has input and ideas on the matter, like the ones recently expressed, please do not hesitate to email <pdo@ripe.net>. I'll gladly collect your feedback to take action upon it. Best Regards Emilio On 11/26/12 10:27 PM, Tore Anderson wrote:
* Emilio Madaio
The draft document for the proposal described in 2012-03, "Intra-RIR Transfer Policy Proposal", has been published. The impact analysis that was conducted for this proposal has also been published
You can find the full proposa and the impact analysis at:
On this page, it would appear that the phrase «Within the RIPE NCC service region,» is to be added at the beginning of the second paragraph in section 5.5.
and the draft document at:
However, that phrase is not found in the «new text» box on this page. That must be an omission?
As a general feedback to the draft document page, not specific to 2012-03, I find it preferable if the «original text» and «new text» boxes are made as small as absolutely possible. If the paragraphs that aren't touched by the proposal are kept outside of those boxes, it is much easier to spot the actual changes made, than it is if you include the entire original and new section side-by-side (as is the case with 2012-03's draft document).
Taking it one step further, it would be even better if those paragraphs that have only change by a small amount (i.e., aren't completely rewritten) have the actual changes highlighted, e.g., using strikethrough for deleted text, and coloured text for added text (such as the "Within the RIPE NCC service region" added by this proposal).
The changes indicated in sections 6.0 and 6.3 at https://www.ripe.net/ripe/policies/proposals/2009-03/draft are two examples I like.
In any case, I support this policy proposal.
Best regards,